More instruments
Add some more instruments to hand the melody off to. Also, work on creating some nifty counter melodies. And definitely work on smoother key changes. Sliding into a new key just sounds bad. Plain and simple. Hope this is useful.
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I made this a while ago but edit many things. its differend then my other songs. like better, i hope you like it.
for me is it differend then my other songs.
Dj-tom
Thx to BlueFuzion for the awesome new samples! thank you very much...
Dj-tom responds:
Thx Guy, but why 2? And how do you slide in fl? I always wanted that. :)
Pretty Good!
Its not great but its definitely better than a lot of others. Like what DaveGuy said needs a little more bass and good lead synths. I personally would have liked the beat to be a little faster. They way it is right now seems to me like it still has potential to be changed and made into a longer; more house, hardcore, or happy song. You could probably also slow down the beat a little and make it more trippy and mellow. Anyway its your work and if your happy of the results thats cool with me and i think everyone else. Its still good as is though just thought i would give a suggestion.
Dj-tom responds:
Thanks for the comment! I know it needs à Bass but its Like an half year ago i made this so im better now. Soz for bad english
COOL
i was rocking my head BAck and Forth at this
Brilll,
By The Way B4re u Say anyth1n 1m 13
and in coinsadence my name is tom
LOL !
Keep It Up..
good bro
Just needs bass, thats all. other than that, good job with the lead synths. Keep up the good work bro.
Why don't you check out some of my songs?
Dj-tom responds:
okay thx, i check your music if you tell some of your friends about me :p
MY FIRST REAL GOOD COMMENT!!!
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