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ja som sagt; nice synkoper på basen :) GLÖM INTE ATT FIXA MED EQ:en

Your best song yet

I think that your songs are quite similar to mine in style, I think this one would benefit from another tune over the top of the current piano backing.

With the piano and the drum bits it almost sounds like you're trying to make two different songs at the same time. The song's quite flat, try making different variations in pitch, it would be good to build it up to something before letting the drums kick into that roll thing (I don't know the name of it :P)

I hear some bad notes here, it could be worth making the entire song with the same instrument and when that sounds alright, change them all to different instruments (Low ones to a certain instrument and so on).

I don't know how you make your songs, I find the best way is to start with a beat, then to add a backing then to finally add a tune. The backing should just start with a single note and when you've got a catchy rhythm, you then start to alter their pitch.

Good luck!