I like it
Ok so this was pretty good tune, it was kinda differant, didnt understand it at first but it does have a "JAZZY" feel. so notbad there, It lacked variaty in this, so with that you may want too add other sounds and even sound/fx just to give it that extra touch and ofcourse at the sametime giving it more variaty of all the differant sounds and such. However it did have a nice "BUILD-UP" and kept going, the music had a good quality to it, but anyways good tune here i enjoyed it, and look forward to more from you.
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This was differant and had a nice build up but, It lacked variaty in this, so with that you may want too add other sounds and even sound/fx just to give it that extra touch and ofcourse at the sametime giving it more variaty of all the differant sounds and such.