I may not be the best critic

But the taking and adding of some of the loops didn't seem to bother me, if you got something good to loop then it's good to make use of it eh? You changed the pace of the song enough where I didn't grow tired of it, the piano was a good choice.

yea... :)

Not bad, the drum beats are pretty good but its starts of wierd, slow drum straight to fast....apart from that the song fits well good job with the violins but when they kick in at 1:30 its a bit much and they dong work well it just sounds like noise the song. The main riff gets a bit much.... and the is no really is no different parts to the song you just added and took away the same loops/instruments.
Having said that this song isn't bad....just work on those things in you next song and it'll be perfect. Ill give you a big 5 because the song is catchy from the start...but only a 5 because because it gets increasingly repetitive. keep up the good work.

P.S look foward to see how you improve you next song....can't wait to hear it :)

The Dance

Yo man, this is pretty good. Did you play it at the rave at all?