So wait. . .

Is it Bee thumpin' or Beet humpin'? o_O

Sorry, mind got distracted. . . ^^;

I like the track. I don't know squat about music, so that doesn't mean much, but I know what I like. It was energetic via the beat yet (mostly) kind of mellow with the tones of the foreground music. Either that or it was the instruments of the foreground music. . . My brain is strange. It likes strange things. . . *tic* *grin*

Keep it up. You've certainly made some unique tracks which, unlike many who can claim such, don't actually suck. 8B Looking forward to your future work.

too heavy

the song is good but the bass kills it its to heavy
after the heavy bass fades the song gets good
perhaps also an issue with my ears are very low/high tones

Sounds like this is where you hit your peak...

Probably the best song you have ever made. Like ever. You should probably give up on dubstep and make more of this, except with an extra helping of breakbeats.
<3

This song

It is aweso- *jet flies overhead, drowning out the music for a few seconds* *restarts*

Yeah, this song is good :D

Interesting.

It's not too bad. Given that you're new, you've got a lotta room to grow, but we all start somewhere. My main suggestion is that you should avoid any amount of repetition, which unfortunately, this song kind of has in spades. The essence of trance and electronic is to be ever-shifting. Trance is the jazz of electronic music; keep it unexpected, keep it off of any predictability. Generally, you're supposed to let trance just kind of flow on its own. So just keep that in mind going forward and you'll do great!