ok newer version

crank up the kick volume and clap, they get lost in the synth. i like that you changed up the melody in the middle that was a great change. maybe add some layering of other instruments. you could replace your top saw with another instrument from time to time. Saws are best used for climax because of thier crazy power, so try to use less of them to make the moments when you do use them more meaningful and not as common. this song is shaping us well man. personal message me about the progress and when it is done please