Very good, but there are better...
I liked it, but i've heard better. There are no ways to improve it, it's perfect. It's just that you mixed it very good but it was kind of risky too since it switches too much sometimes. I liked the ending, I've seen (heard) a lot of songs having troubles with the ending and just adding something "end-like". But you managed to fix the ending perfectly, but don't mix all the classical styles together please.