Sub-par
The piece in itself needs a lot of work; it sounded like something that was thrown together in perhaps ten minutes time without much thought for how it would sound to anybody who didn't absolutely love your eight note melody. The melody itself has a lot of potential, but supporting sounds would require careful thought, and some variation of the melody couldn't hurt either. And, while I'm not especially fond of the tital, I suppose it does aptly fit the song itself.
Keep working on it.