winter
This reminds of music from either Blast Corps (never played it) or Perfect Dark... heh :]
I think it needs to build after 1:00 and grow. It needs to have more sound of bells and strings or something to add to a haunting effect...
When i made this song, i kept thinking of the snowy areas in the N64 zelda games. I think this song is pretty decent, with all of the different synths and themes. Reminds me of a cold, yet mysterious winter day. Comment, rate, criticize, and enjoy!
winter
This reminds of music from either Blast Corps (never played it) or Perfect Dark... heh :]
I think it needs to build after 1:00 and grow. It needs to have more sound of bells and strings or something to add to a haunting effect...
interesting idea....actually, that sounds really good, i'll see whati can do about that. thanks! and sorry, yes i do do alot of improving lol, forgot to put that on the last response
I liked it
This songs pretty cool, and well composed, but at 1:32 you need to learn to change from the higher notes to the lower ones faster, because they're a little longer, it make it seem a bit too repetitive. The transition near the end could've been less abrupt, although I'm over-exagerating that a bit. Also, I'm going to go with Le-Guardia here, and I'm going to say where the bass beats were hitting three times, add a soft open high hat or something, but you should experiment with what sounds best.
what do you mean by that? should i make the bass faster or less faster? i'll see what i can do about the drumbeat, though i kind of like it. i'll see what i can do with the transition at the end as well. all of these are pretty easy fixes, thanks for the review!
Sweet song!
Sounds pretty nifty.
Pros:
-Good selection of drums.
-Everything just doesn't fit together, and yet you find a way to fit them together. It's just awesome.
-I really do think of winter when I hear this song.
-Awesome way to end it. Pretty cool.
Cons:
-The bass is given a lot of attention in this song. Like, it's cool when the bass part has a nice arpeggio that's fast and goes a lotta places, but when you gave it to the bass here, it played the same thing over and over until it's time was up. It's a solo, that's not playing a solo. That part may have sounded the same even if you kept the volume down.
-Personal opinion, but having the hi-hat leave at 2:18 and adding in a bunch of the bass drum kinda... Well, suffice it to say, it reminded me of a bouncer at a strip club. That took away half the rhythm entertainment cus the hi-hat was going every 8th beat.
interesting feedback. i'll see what i can do with the bass and the drums. strip club?? lol wow, i'll see to that xD
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I love the drums...you're great at composing drums, in all of your songs, the drums make the song really exciting
thanks once again bro...it's interesting the kind of stuff that you can make with just a keyboard 0_0
Wow
Well, it reminded me of a snowy area too!
It would be totally awesome for an action game (or a platformer)...l hope that some flash artist listens to this and gets inspired...sometimes l wish l could make flash so that l can use these beautiful tracks that l find in the Audio Portal...
Yeah me too, sadly enough i have no idea how to make games or flash animation :P
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.