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I'm back with a new strong and emotional HipHop track, but this is only a demonstration, the song is not finished yet. I submit this to NG because I want to get some tips about what could be done with the track to make it catchier, stronger and more emotional. I think this could get a great project, I would be really glad if I got some criticism or tips to make it better. If you notice something, please write a comment!
Enjoy listening, voting and reviewing! :]

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Average Score: 9.4 / 10

Score: 10

"excellent"

by: fosterkid

date: July 17, 2009

this sounds really great! the only flaws i see with it would probably have to be the synth being drowned out by everything else. Keep up the good work!

July 18, 2009

Author's Response:

Thanks, I hope you'll take a listen at the full version, too.^^

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Score: 9

"A bit of cons crit."

by: Gearhead55

date: July 17, 2009

The synth sound that comes in at around 00:45 is kind of drowned out by the drums, other than that, this sounds great, and I can't wait for the full version!

July 17, 2009

Author's Response:

Thanks for the review, Gearhead!
I'll make the synth a bit louder and if it sounds good, I'll leave it louder.^^

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Score: 9

"Cool, but..."

by: KingofKool

date: July 16, 2009

That drum beat has been done a million times before, nothing agaisnt it just unoriginal, I like this a lot though, good job.

July 17, 2009

Author's Response:

I don't really know if I should change them because they sound like many other HipHop drums, this type of drums was the best suited to the track, but I'll experiment a bit and try to make another. If I don't find any better, I'll keep this. ;D
Thanks for the review, KingofKool!^^

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Score: 10

"Slammin"

by: DjOsiris

date: July 15, 2009

Excellente' very nice bro. Keep up the inspirations.

July 15, 2009

Author's Response:

Thanks, DjOsiris!^^

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Score: 10

"I liked it"

by: Revenantes

date: July 13, 2009

I don't give many reviews but I have been listening to your music awhile now and I really liked this one and I really liked the beeping in it, it made it rather unique to me. Good job and hopefully you'll make a version with and without it?

July 13, 2009

Author's Response:

Would be a good idea. When I added the beeping I thought, that's a sound which gives the song some "special feeling" as well, so I did not erase it after it was in the track. But there will be uploaded one without the beeping, too. :D
Thank you, Revenantes!