Hmmm...

Just hitting you back for your review on my page man. ;) But um... Let's see...

Don't really know what to say exactly. First thing I noticed is that when one of your synths hits a low end it's off tune just by a little bit. It was like a stab in my ears so it was easy to point out. :P
Um... I noticed that everything follows the same melody. If you had some variety in that department, it would surely improve your songs.

But on the plus side, I noticed that you're using some FX. That is very good!!! I noticed a large portion of people don't use them. That or I'm listening to the same people over and over again. :/ But yes, keep on experimenting with the fx, fiddle with the settings on the sounds, and you'll be sounding pro in no time. Speaking of fx, I think you should put a bit more on the instruments in your music. Or at least, in this submission. And some non-stock beat sounds would help you a lot too.

All in all, it was a track I probably would've made myself two years ago. :P If you listen to the stuff at the top of my page, then the bottom, you'll see a remarkable difference. ;) Just stick with it and you'll get better. Stick with it and you'll stand out.