THIS IS GREAT!

I think if we sent this track to The Necto in Ann Arbor, MI, it would bait it out of suck-monkey-balls status!

Sounds okay but...

the sound that comes in at about 13 seconds in is a bit too overpowering, not to mention that this beat is simple for Trance, let alone Techno. You have a nice melody at aout 2:04 but it's short lived, this song could have easily been 5 minutes. So in summary:

1. Techno usually has halfway complex drum patterns that are changing, so work on that

2. Don't overpower the mix with tube-ish sounds

hmmm

sounds pretty awesome im not exactly gonna put you down because i my self havent made a submission yet so good job who am i to judge without knowing how much work you put into it but either way good song