better than the original

the only problem i found was the automation at 0:12 put the cutoff too low. the cutoff only should have went to about 10% and back up not all the way down...

You suck! This isn't the original speed!

Which makes it all more a remix! Sound's great, love the quick uprise at the beggining, keep it up!

Nice

Drum/snare/cymbal/clap are kind of sudden in the beginning. Otherwise I would say your buildup is great, your synth is nice as well, perfect for the mood and melody.

You just need some more variations of effects and it will sound perfect.

only one tip

make a really kickin off beat bass synth and it would totally rock my socks off. This song needs to be pretty hardcore trance man. good remix so far it is definitely a great song to remix. Just it takes a lot of skill to remix the original because it is so awesome already. Good luck! and remember, HUGE OFFBEAT BASS SYNTH!

Can't wait...

... to hear the full version ^__^.

Maybe add some pad or something in the background (it seems a bit empty back there ^__^)

Hope your "almost broken" arm will heal quickly.

Cheers
9/10
5/5