hey

hmm its cool that u recorded. The sound is a bit scratchy tho

the into is offputting because it is quite repeditive.

I think you need some more practice.

you will start to make some good songs after your 10, to your 15 or even 20th song

so dont give up if u get some bad reviews. I know i have got some bad reviews lol :D

well anyway, hope you got something outa that. Listen to my beat now lol

http://www.newgrounds.com/audio/liste n/246942