I agree with kirby on this one

Fail
Wrong notes completely

Fail!

1.) Note's are wrong
2.) Lugia's MELODY
3.) Criticising is all part of eing a musician
4.) Tis song is epicly bland

Keep it up

I give it an 8/10 it is nice to hear slow music evey now and then and to me it is relaxing so it is nice and peaceful to me. I would have liked it to be a little longer but I guess it is becouse I am use to hearing long songs anyways nice job keep up the work and come out with newer and better songs.

You will never improve...

if you dont accept criticism. Any way, this is just 2 synths, so i dont see how this took you for ever to do, what i would do, * This is the part where i criticize your work* Is add A percussion line to it, ANY thing would help, as this track is very barren, and a total bore fest, but other then that, your synths sound very nice together, and the melody is done accuracy,

I sugest getting a midi keyboard and hooking it up to your DAW if THIS took you for ever, would take you exactly 27 seconds if you had a keyboard....

but good job and all that, hope to here some improvements from your future work,