hi husband

this is good

Hm needs a little more spontaneity.

I'm not suggesting that I didn't like it; it just needs more things going on in my opinion. But, I'm one of those "Industrial radicals" who love chaos and heavy kicks so you may or may not want to take my critique seriously.

+The tech-y feel
- The monotonous progression
+ The killer beat

I'll vote 4/5 since I'm on the extreme side of Industrial :) but for future reference, I recommend submitting to miscellaneous (like the guy below said)

Berry Creative

Dis felt good to listen to

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this shouldn't go under dance.
this should go into either Industrial or Miscellanous (but, that's just my opinion)
i REALLY liked it though.
very different.
5/5