heh
I like the intro. The "prepare for launch" thing. But the explosions are horrid... sounds just like the ones in FL... Maybe get a new explosion sound? This could be the beginning to a decent song IF you drop that rediculous sounding explosion. Good attempt... I think its a 2-3 because its really short and the explosion sounds are horrible... plus some of the levels change during other sounds.
Good attempt. Try a full song!