its pretty nice,

dont give up, your so close, preservere to the end, and other stuff

yeah, forgat all that. this is a pretty nice song, very easy to put lyrics into and its really great how it is now...
BUT if you can make it better, you should...
you dont want to end up like me who's songs are all half made
... lol

AYEEEE

This shit go hard n***a!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Lets do a collab or check out my shit
or both =D