hm.

ok. it was good from the start. i think one thing you could have done is keep the beginning piano part and just played it through so you could have had a build with several background melodies. you have ideas in your head. just try to organize them more.

THANK U

I'm Still at the hospital using my uncles labtop I'll b home by tomorrow I woke up from my coma earlier this morning much luv baby girl I listened to the whole thing and let it loop

when I get home I wanna turn this into a hip hop if u still got the file for me
thank u baby girl I feel alot betta now that u made this