-_- boring
Originality: You used alot of premade samples from FL.
Diversity: You alot of stuff repeating over and over again through the entire song.
Clarity: Couldnt have been a better recording.
Effort: Didnt sound like you tried too hard on this one. Dont use the excust that its your first audio so people will go easy on you.
Overall: Good...but only for a first. Stop repeating things and dont use as many premade samples.