great!

Great job you did here, but the ending was kind of weird, just alter that and it would be an awsome song, so a 9 for you and if you change the ending it'll be a 10 ;)

4/5 9/10

enthralled

[o_O]

Was good

I think the people below me have mentioned everything that needed chageing..but apart from that, a decent tune you got there....not quite up to the high standard of the rare few there is here on newgrounds...but still you have skills..and with the more experience you gain..the more you can improve and get better..
overall good job..:D

OOMMMMMGGGGG!!!!!!!!!

one of the VERRY few people ive found that make me wanna just get up and SHUFFLE MY FUCKING BRAINS OUT!!!!!
BUT...
the only thing i recommend is lowering the pitch on your drum's bass so it has that really nice sub-rocking sound to it. :D
i too make hardstyle so you should be a pal and check some of my stuff out. my hardstyle songs are the shreek remix and "hum hum hum".

I don't like hardstyle

But this stuff was friggin legit. I love it. It's even better when I'm playing it twice (or even thrice) simaltaneously at different times. Sure it musically sounds like crap that way, but it makes me go YEHHHHHHH and that's enough for a 5/5 10/10. Beautiful little piece of hardstyle you've got here.