It's my mom's birthday today. I recorded this for her.
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Hey good chord arangement and all but this does feel kind of empty.. im going to take this and post it on a guitar forum im part of and get a few people to lay some solos over it if it turns out good ill post it back here for you
4/5 as a Bt
3/5 as a song
7/10
It's supposed to be a poppy rock song, with vocals.
But since I'm a horrible singer, I just left it as it is :)
Good
Honestly I cant really judge this the way I want to cause it was a gift so, here's what i think in a nutshell. The intro could be a bit shorter and sounds a little clashy, and it could use some variation between 3:40 to around 4:05, id be more exact but I have to fight with the player, otherwise good piece, has some potential for some great vocals to be added if you got the chance.
On a side note: what did you use to put this together?
Cakewalk SONAR for recording and mixing.
FL Studio for the drums and synths. :) (best sequencer ever)
And it's not really an intro, more like part 1 of the song.
And yeah, it does feel kinda empty without vocals..
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