Nice
The phrasing of the lyrics reminded me of the Smashing Pumpkins. The feel (probably what you were going for) was very relaxing. The tone of the acoustic sounds extremely soothing.
Overall this song was decent and the vocals weren't too bad.
Just me, my acoustic guitar, and my midi keyboard and Edirol, yay. I hope you enjoy, and can bear my crappy singing lol. You've probably seen me submit a rendition of this before; I redid this since I got a new mic.
Breathe in
And breathe out
Fit in
Stand out
A surreal
Subconscious
To quench
Our dread
Breathe in
Breathe out
Take it in
Let it out
Nurture your impermanence
Relapse into the mind
Nice
The phrasing of the lyrics reminded me of the Smashing Pumpkins. The feel (probably what you were going for) was very relaxing. The tone of the acoustic sounds extremely soothing.
Overall this song was decent and the vocals weren't too bad.
Nice one
I like this piece, the singing is better than you think. I really like the harmony, the guitar parts and the strings. well put together just watch some of the guitar around 50 seconds because the rhythms clash a bit. but other than that it was awesome.
Thanks, I should really watch my guitar parts more, I'm getting lazy with it.
Thanks again man!
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.