pretty good.

i like that effect the 1st and 3rd times, but its too loud and out of place for the 2nd one IMO. The volumes are a little better.

The only thing is though, is that i was looking for it to have an accompanying hi synth with the melody before it to come into an Amazing melody. But instead, it 'built-up' to a calm part. I really think you should make it have more of a 'climax'. ;)

2:00 is good cause it goes back to a solid bass. but at 2:33, what I WOULD do(if it were me), take out the synths and just have a bassline for the ending, and take out that loud effect at the end. but it is your song, i just like that. this ending seems kinda weird for me ;)

pretty good, but i think it could use a little more work

nice

damn you learn quickly, i didn't have the automation clips down until my 10th or so song =P
Nice job on this btw.
as said before, the intro is a bit loud.
check out the new version of solstice if ya got time.

decent.

the trance airwaves that come in a little after a minute is really good, but as the person before me said before, it gets a little weird at parts mainly with the drums. u gotta turn down the ufckin compression on those kicks though. they hurt my ears and i dont even have my $200 sub turned on! its gotta sound more put together.

honestly i like the first one better, but they both have pros and cons. if there was a way to combine them, that would be legit. just something to think about.

Also, if you haven't checked out my two new releases, please do so. i'm trying some different genres and i need some feedback. keep up the good work bro!

-KDUB-

nice

i really dont like the beginning being it too loud and also giving a false sense of what the real song is, but the melody oh man (:
its sweet i love the rest of most of the song
i look forward to hearing your second song or the 3rd version of this song

keep practicing ;D

This one...

Out of both versions, I prefer this one.

Reason being is the snyths you used throughtout the song. Really gave the song a space-like feeling to it.

Nice song here! Love the pianos and melodies.

For constructive criticism, I would suggest not to use the DNC_Snare_3 too much. While it is good for percussion purposes, to me it doesn't suit well using them as transitions. Take 0:29 - 0:35 for example.

I would suggest using other means of transition.

Overall, a good job!

Voting Details: Current Score - 4.69
Voted 4 - lowered to 4.37
Voter # - 3

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