WAZZUP!?!
The songs are good but you can"t just throw a song together thinking its going to be a good metal song without your personal opinion. A heavy metal song has to come from hate, misery, anger, frustration and from deep within your soul. Think of something that made you really pissed off or really upseting, have the song come from a dark part of your heart, really feel it. It is an ok song though keep trying.
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