Yay for Indie!
My favorite parts were the guitar picking at 4:30, and the guitar solo. Another aspect of the song that I like a lot is how your voice sounds like the guy from Interpol's. Great band, if you haven't check them out, do it.
There were times where the music sounded really post-rocky, something like Explosions in the Sky, which i also liked quite a bit. Only problem is, like that kinda music, it can drag on and get a little tiresome. One thing I'd suggest (and I don't expect you to follow, but its just a small suggestion) would be to include some sound effects to fill the gaps where your voice isn't singing. Reading the lyrics "A sailing reflection, Catching the drift of connection", I'd put in the sound of an ocean, just to give it that extra hint of mystery and metaphor. you can tweak it ever so slightly by adding an echo effect (a faster echo, with a mildly short decay).
Anyways, good job man and thanks for the review on my song :)