I don't know what these guys are saying, but I personally like it and might consider it for a warehouse.

Hmm....

It's a pretty good song, but I just don't feel that there is enough energy in this to sustain it until the point it ends.

Good, but not great.

Mo' meat on 'er bones

I felt like this needed a bigger climax where you put in break at 1:25. Also, I thought the fuzz bass was a little too heavy for the synth you chose to carry the melody. I'd use a louder, slightly detuned one if I were going to suggest something to try with it... maybe with 2 channels...

Otherwise, I liked the way you faded from the intro into the main melody. And it was a nice touch using the pad in the background and bringing it in as part of the melody and the beat.