Repetitive
I give you a 6 for trying, the fact that you made this piece and took time to create music. Quite repetitive 2:15 into the beat is good, ending is good, should have put more of that news broadcast in the beginning, it only builds up 3/4th's of the way in. Song should build up at around 1:00 or 1:30. Doesn't get anywhere for awhile. It's alright man, keep making more music.