Hmmm....
You need to replace the FL Slayer with a different guitar sample. Slayer just sounds so cheezy. Lol!
I like the strings. They create a pretty cool atmosphere in this song. They are rather epic in their own way. I really like them a lot. So don't change or get rid of the strings!
I love that effect at the 0:31ish mark. Very cool sounding, and it really grasps your attention. Plus it is surprising. Which is always fun for a listener.
It is pretty short. I suggest lengthening it myself. But, that is up to you really.
The percussion is pretty simple and straightforward. Yet, it is just right for this song. I like what you have going on actually.
Overall I like this, but there is definitely work to be done.
4/5 and 7/10 overall. I see potential in this actually. :-)
-Gravey-
OPQC 
