Excellent

Has the feeling of fast and rhythmic and slow and steady at the same time, sort of like the Aural version of a travelator at the airport :D

Now...Why can't I be this good >:( Haha

Loved the song!

Impressive

I love the easy going sound of it, this is the type of music I search and search for. every now and then someone has created a great work like this for me to add to my collection.

Soothing

Nice up beat and very enjoyable. sounds like a fantasy song

a very good start :)

I enjoyed the quirks in your melody and progression. I like how the pan pipe sample goes down in pitch slightly when it decays at the end but I'm not sure if that's because you're using a reverb effect for the decay or because you just intentionally shifted the pitch at the particular moment.

As a general rule for mixing down unmastered versions of stuff I try to keep the master peak at -10 and then use an excellent free VST compressor called endorphin to raise the volume, since that plugin was designed from the start to never clip.

What you have now is rather nice, keep it up :D