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Not much of a 2 week come back, but it's better than nothing. I'm holding out on the good stuff I got cooked up :3

4-08-09 Edit :

Oh snaps. This was unexpected... uh.... yeah. Since now that this song is going to a larger audience now, I was hoping if I could get some constructive criticism. I'm aware that I have made better songs than this, but I hope to make this one even better. :3

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Score: 8

"Great great great!"

by: MalTheDestroyer

date: August 26, 2009

I absolutely love this beat--*this* is real hip hop, not the garbage they play on the radio. It reminds me of some of the great independent stuff I used to play on my radio show back in the day.

My biggest criticism is that some of your transitions are choppy; you should try to avoid letting samples just cut off suddenly. You should also make an effort to find more samples to weave in, or at least toy with the beat--that will help keep it from getting repetitive. See if you can find the old Tomfoolio tracks Son of Drifter and Sleepwalker; those are good examples of what I'm talking about.

August 26, 2009

Author's Response:

Making transitions with samples is easier said than done. Whenever I sample something, I listen to the entire thing about 5 times, just to get an idea from it. Then from there, I take what I can. I do my best to use as much as possible, but there's times where things just don't go as well as you'd expect them to. That's pretty much what happened with the transitions in this one. The sample its self didn't even follow a standard hip-hop song time signature, so I had to cut a lot out.

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Score: 10

"Genius!"

by: mrbloog

date: May 30, 2009

Do not listen to the haters, and like you said in a previous reply to a comment, you do not which is good. I just wanted to say, keep making songs like this, and you will gain a very large audience. As I am into songs which add, other elements to sustain a very good song.

~ MrBloog

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Score: 10

"Your next!"

by: DBrackett

date: May 26, 2009

I know my flash is sketchy but i plan on using this next for my next flash. Im going to spend more time on it, so it will compliment this track well.

Good song, i feel this song running through a panel of different lives who are in despair, but in a medieval setting. Wars and Battles fighting over the challenges charged by the higher officials, and a higher power.

Its really deep man. Keep up the good work. Ill send you a PM when my new flash is in with this song.

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Score: 9

"Good"

by: Ray80

date: May 24, 2009

This is a good piece, sad and interesting.

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Score: 10

"it definately fair."

by: becauseimjay

date: May 15, 2009

you ever get that when feeling when you hear a song, and you can picture a whole storyline/plot/movie/whatever to it? that's the feeling i get with most of your songs. i wouldn't call it emo. i could picture some samurai type scene. or mafia love story crap. it's amazing

-becauseimjay

Ps. I use yunveroz's & your instrumentals when i mix songs with acapellas of real artists. when you guys make beats like these, it keeps me going. keep up the good work man.