This could be the final version if you all think it should be.

:WHAT I DID:

1st: Tweaked the percussion to suit my needs
2nd: Made a custom arp
3rd: Made a second custom arp pattern for variety
4th: Found the premade string and pad patterns for Iridium's song
5th: Arranged the previously mentioned string/ pad patterns to create intro
6th: Made a quiet baseline that plays through most of the song (very quiet. listen closely right as the song starts)
7th: Made a pattern to serve as a second chorus that adds much epicness
8th: Made the ending of the second chorus
9th: Decided to try vocals out
10th: Added vocals
11th: Exported demo
12th: Listened to demo again
13th: Removed quiet bass at beginning
14th: Changed up pad and string patterns
15th: Exported this song
16th: Uploaded to Newgrounds
17th: Typed this explanation of the song
18th: Prayed that people will like it

Anyway, I really need you all to rate it and review it :)

Enjoy :)
---jbarnett---