um....lol

i am so sorry for this score. Despite the fat i love the instruments, and the drum beats wicked Punch, i cant get my head around the poor structure. it has several melodies, which is great.. unfortunately they are all in a different key to eachother. making them all clash and sound awful. I am however interested in what it would sound like if all the melodies where in the right keys... have a think and give it a go! i am sure it could be wicked. P.S. 4.13 ONWARDS ITS IN KEY... and good. its the first 4 mins that i struggled to get through. Good effort. :D