Hey....
... this shit is good man! If made asa pure song (not film-music) the beat must arrive earlier. This is quite simple, but it has a very good melody through the whole song. More happenings is wanted, maybe some background sounds or more different beats to spice things up. It really sounds god when the beat u now added on late came in. Fat shit!!
Looking forward to hear more stuff from ya man!
/Rucklo