Whoa...

The intro is cool as fuck, and is completely different from the rest of the song. Great idea for that man!

I like the kick, but it could have been slightly higher in the mix. The melody is pretty nifty, but a little to repetitive. Probably would have benefited if you changed instruments that were playing the melody.

I don't want to dog on ya to much for this because you got screwed by the power going out.

So 3/5 and 5/10 overall. Cause I can see where you were going with this. And I like the idea.

-Gravey-