Rhyme comprised through inspirational moments in my life.
Kindergarten
The amount of emphasis on the already unnecessary "f" word killed the whole thing as it was already dying. Is that loop taken directly from "Clint Eastwood" or am I from another reality? What's with the sound of the voice? I don't think you naturally produce that reverb. You aren't singing in time with the beat or rhythm in way too many parts.
I appreciate your review. It was very informative. I'll take everything you said into consideration. That reverb ya heard was an echo I added on. I duplicated the track and staggered them to create the echo. The loop was from clint eastwood which I turned into an instrumental. My, voice, that's just the way I rap sometimes, I like to practice versatility. Thanks for the review, even though I don't really take them seriously because I don't mess with flash, I just use fianl cut pro for movie editing. Alot of my shit is for shits and giggles. If you checked my tracks you'd see that.
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.
FodeyOz 
