Nice, but could use some work.
I believe that as the song progresses, so too should the orchestral piece. Metal and orchestra go really well together, nad you've done a good job mixing the two, but the orchestra needs to be tweaked a bit in my opinion.
In my mind, the metal rocked, but the orchestra was a bit too one-note.
aside from that though, a well done piece. Cheers bud. :)