Nice work
The version on Magic Pen is better I think
Author Comments
This song is an extended part of Chapter Three, the main song will be featuring in magic pen 2, this part however isn't and so i thought I'd share it with you all to as a little treat, please provide me with feedback. To listen to the proper chapter three go to myspace.com/pitbulljonesm usic, as the song is going to be for sale on itunes with chapter one soon.
Sweet indie!
You might get really popular if you keep coming out with quality songs like this! The echoes of the instruments is a pretty sweet effect to add to the song. We need more songs like this replacing the shit that is coming from pop singers and other asses. Anyway, cool song and hope more quality Indie comes from you.
Very Good
I'm glad you went back to the style of Chapter One (which is by far my favorite out of the puppy dog tales) but there is still something missing here, and I don't know what it is. It's still a brilliant track.
ha!
good, but id cut on the feedback, the song sound way to echoey..
that, and sometimes, when the instruments fall together, notes tend to sound off key.
finally, i feel the song lacks a climax.
well, as you might have noticed, im not very familiar with the indie genre, so maybe im saying some stupid things :D
i have not to listened to chapter 3, so i could be missing the spot.
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