Look, I'm on newgrounds!
i LIKES the beginning/almost at the end (LIKES was in capslock by accident)
oh, and it would be nice if those notes blended and all, but thats the software/midi/whatever effects that's fault, no?
Author Comments
My first song is here! It starts off with a slow intro, but It quickly speeds up to a nice beat. I've spent quite a while on this, so I hope my efforts get me more than a blam here.
Comment and review. I'd really appreciate the feedback. Thanks!
-Bahamut.0ne
Bahamut0ne responds:
ty for the comment: and no, most of it was cause i made the song too loud and when GarageBand compressed it, it caused alot of static. I might "remaster" it at somepoint, just to lower the volume.
Dude
I like tacos. But this song makes me feel like a space pirate.
Yee
Bahamut0ne responds:
again, I would prefer reviews that make sense, but ty anyway.
A Good Start
All things considered, a nice first song. It's better than other first songs I've heard on NG. As mentioned before, be careful of volume. Really liked the ending, wished it lasted a bit longer. It was pretty repetitive, but I liked how you slowly layered more stuff on top of the base tune to build up to the ending. Still, it would have been nicer if the build up had gone a bit faster and the end was a bit longer.
Other than that, it was a nice tune, not too long and not too short, and included good instrumental choices. Based on what this song has showed me, if you work on your getting better a bit more, you'll be cranking out some nice pieces.
Bahamut0ne responds:
Thanks for the review, Dellashim, glad you liked it! YOu should try writing some stuff, theirs plenty of free sequencers/soundfonts for begginers.
I am high off of this song
OK maybe not not really but I am addicted to it keep up the good work and I think this will be your best song. XD
Bahamut0ne responds:
Thanks for the good review, man! Somehow, however, I hope my songs will improve from here on out ;)
Not too shabby
Now I am no music expert, heck I don't even know how to use programs like Fruity Loops and the like, but that wasn't that bad at all. A word of advice from an average listener, I believe the buildup for the ending could have been a bit shorter and the real ending a bit longer. Also, it seems like at the end it was simply too loud and the sound was distorted a bit and ruined the rhythm.
But definitely nice good sir!
Bahamut0ne responds:
I agree completeley. I kinda wanted a "slow" section in betwee the Mass triplets, but I decided against it. I've been fooling around with Garageband (my probram) for a couple of weeks, so I haven't quite grasped the reins yet. Thanks for the review, I really appreciate it!
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