Razor pips and fat slides...

I like it. Though, it could have been mastered with more care. It's very... okay.

Nice dragging and dropping skills there...

You have really nimble fingers there. I mean, it does take a lot of skill to place a Garageband loop in a timeline...

Don't eat batteries.

And sounding basic isn't bad.

Any one listening can tell that your new to making music, and it does sound as if some presets were used. Most people will tell you thats a bad thing, but as far as I'm concerned, you've done what it takes to make something appropriate to your skill level, that sounds good. Its that trait which in my mind sets apart the people who have some skill in this business from those who just throw stuff together hoping it turns out ok.

Keep it up, dabble in the world of music some more.

On a side note... Lenkobiscuits comment made me "Lol".

sounds like garageband to me

In fact I recognize every single one of those patterns you used.
nothing ground breaking, you should pay more attention in school. lol.

wow

its like nine inch nails if they werent completely fucking gay