Quite Good!

I must say your melody was not that crazy as you wanted, but it doesn't have to be.

This is a personal opinion but I think your work is divided in too clear parts, perhaps you could make a softer transition between them.

But it's very good, it was surely worth your effort!

(btw, your title is not attractive at all, I just clicked to listen to this because it is the only left on the newest ones, you could work on that too)