Try workin on it
This has potential but its repetetive and needs transitions, try to vary in ur drums and instuments and dont sell it until you get at least 5 10s in every song u wanna sell ;)
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part of one of my older albums, 2 out of 10 songs. Considering selling album for maybe $4. tell me if you like it.
RawGreen responds:
Good idea, but if I put every song on here I want to sell then nobody would buy it because they could get it free.
But the only problem with digging up my old work is that some sound files and such are corrupt. Manageable, but irritating.
Yeah. I can got over these :D
not too bad
def NOT album worthy. i would never buy this lol.
where is the melody? and trnasitions? intro? i can't even tell where this climax's. sry dude, this is pretty suckish lol.
work on melodies, and bass + kick and drums more. then u can even ponder a album.
check out my stuff, i think ull be able to see what i mean.
4/5
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