Perhaps some revision is at hand?
I can definitely see where you are trying to go with it. It's just that you didn't quite seem to get there. I think you put to much emphasis on the left hand piano, and the right hand isn't detailed enough (to simple) also there is to much piano in general, maybe you should through in a trumpet somewhere =).
Finally, even though the drums and bass have that jazzy sound to them, they are just a little repetitive. It seems like if you change those things around, this would get a 5/5 and 10/10 from me.
Also... *ahem*; Aaron425692, Why the hell are you listening to a jazz song if you hate jazz? More importantly, why would you vote low on a submission just because of your biased views?
I hate dumb people