Haha

That made me laugh. No, seriously it did. First I wouldn't call it trance, it more housy. First, don't change the tempo all randomly and shit - it makes the song sound gimmicky like you'd hear it at some demented circus. Then what you need is good stab-like bass to oppose your kick, and it sounds like you were going for that but you used some shitty hoover thing instead. You should filter your snare some more and throw in some open hats, then you'd be good.