Very nice

Emotions are conveyed right off the bat.

Piano was the perfect choice for the voicing of that melody.
The strings seem to effectively support the piano.
The drums seem a bit out of place, yet, complete the function of moving the song forward.
Structure was not obvious, but seems to be there.
The piece seems slightly repetitive.

The melody in specific:
- Is nicely composed. I appreciate the balance in voicing on the piano.
- On a scale from 1 to 10, the emotion of the overall melody I would rate a 6.

A suggestion to fix this: feature on very high pitched note that leads down to the resolution of the melody. If you are familiar with the term "skip-wise," this is what I am referring to. You did a bit of this already around 0:40.