Hahaha! Yea
I agree with Dadde. Don't like the chip sound ^^ one of them's good though. Think it's chip 3. Well i thought it was good when i used sytrus. Even though you used chip you had a pretty good melody and I liked it. I loved the transition at 0;58. Sounded really cool XD Good job. Keep it up!
Definitely getting better :D 5/5
-Cheers Brando