I dislike loops =[
Hmm... Well... Let me give a quick listen first. Hmm...
Alright back at zero. Starts off alright. No problems really. Solid beat I guess, what the fuck is that!? The insturmnet you introduced at :12 is pure shit, dude. Like That is awful....
I like the insturment that comes in at :24 or so. It sounds pretty cool man.
Now, for that beat, you need some FX on it. I like your kick, but I wonder if your kicks would sound better without headphones if you layered them. I can't hear them, unless I get the headphones.
I dislike your hi hats a lot, too. They sound really plain. I think a small reveerb would do. About 7-10% would do the trick. Same for your crash, too.
3/5
Everlasting-Elements
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