Hmm

This song would be better off in Drum N bass section as the people from trance section aren't too friendly when they hear a song in their section thats not classified as it.

Ohter than that, this still sounds relaxing and whoo.

sup

Good intro.

The drum and bass style drums coming in then leaving was good.

But then that kept repeating and the melody kept repeating from intro to end, maybe think of moar. Lie around 1:25 it changes and thats awesome. that needed to happy sooner. Then the piano was great too.... use that moar.... as in give hints that a piano will be taking the melody by hitting a chord or note here and there quietly earlier on. This will also give variety to your song.

After 1:25 it got a lot better.

Good job, keep it up.

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