one advice....

use these rhythms with the regular piano/strings sounds you use in epic song....finish a full year, now I'll rest and try returning with full review force if not some at least

Hay

Soz like been busy with family stuff....
Ok soo this is random lol. I don't like it. But at least it short. I supose the beat is slow and steady and thats cool. I really find the over the top stuff soo Annoying!!
Could you take some time to play out a smooth beat like this an and then be very careful wat you add. I would love to hear something like that...
Fun
Spam ^_^

lol XD

pretty .. well pretty far away from ur normal music ;).. well.. yeah i agree it sounds too basic but otherwise it's pretty gangsta' made =).

Helth
4/5

Keep it up bro' :)

A few things....

1) it sounds too, well, basic. I know rap beats aren't the best form of music in the world, but I would strive for something great, not just something that someone can possibly rap to. Right now, this is a good beat only because it kinda lays down for the lyrics and it's easy to rap to. You want something that will make people say "whoa that's a hot rap beat, who made that" even when there's lyrics on it.
2) All the synths sound similar because they all have some form of distortion on them. I think the distortion needs to be taken off a few. Furthermore, the melody overwhelms the drums after all the instruments come in. You can still hear it kinda though. Just turn the drums up slightly. Especially the snare, that definitely needs to be turned up. Leave the hats at the volume that they're at right now, last thing a song needs is very loud hi-hats.

Other than those two points, the song sounds like a good beat to rap on. It's a work in progress though, so take your time and perfect it. Btw, check out one of my three beats (one is listed in miscellaneous) and listen to how I have the drums. I recommend checking out run shit down since that's closest to your style.

possibilities

possibilities , it feels like Rambo gearing up to go to war setting traps making weapons.
Keep the instruments but more effects on them make it smother,but you got the ,main them very nice let me no when its finished.