omg =\ so much potential

this could be AWESOME, needs WAYYYY more kick, a nice buildup (yours is pretttyyy good, though )

and yeh as stated below, the bass is 100% needed.

not bad though =]

-AriA

Come take a look at my stuff too =]

so here is your help

the musik and beat at the start is good
1. at 00:37 uhr there is missing a low bass (that would be great)
2. and the starting symth maybe has to change into an other synth (don't now?)

but the bass is really necessary